Fanfic advent day 4
Dec. 4th, 2019 11:29 amRequest from Tumblr: I'd really love any alternate-POV snippets for Black Water Rising?
Link to original story: Black Water Rising. This is the Agent Carter one in which they're stuck in an underground Hydra deathtrap that's filling up with water, also the first long fic I wrote in the fandom, after season one.
Since the entire fic is in Peggy's POV, we never got to see the Jack or Daniel scenes when they're not with her. So this is their side of the scene after Peggy leaves them alone, before Jack swims to the hangar, when he tells Daniel the Okinawa story.
This one's a bit interesting because (having written him a lot more by now) I actually no longer think the initial line of dialogue that this missing scene opens with is in character for Jack, but I'm keeping it because it's from the original story and I wanted to tie them together; the first couple of lines here are the last lines Peggy hears as she walks away.
Also posted on Tumblr.
( 1600 words under the cut )
Link to original story: Black Water Rising. This is the Agent Carter one in which they're stuck in an underground Hydra deathtrap that's filling up with water, also the first long fic I wrote in the fandom, after season one.
Since the entire fic is in Peggy's POV, we never got to see the Jack or Daniel scenes when they're not with her. So this is their side of the scene after Peggy leaves them alone, before Jack swims to the hangar, when he tells Daniel the Okinawa story.
This one's a bit interesting because (having written him a lot more by now) I actually no longer think the initial line of dialogue that this missing scene opens with is in character for Jack, but I'm keeping it because it's from the original story and I wanted to tie them together; the first couple of lines here are the last lines Peggy hears as she walks away.
Also posted on Tumblr.
( 1600 words under the cut )