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Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2007-02-21 07:29 pm

Ficathon story #8 (and new WIP): The Light of a Fading Sun

Tazmy and Kodiak beta'd the first few chapters of this a loooong time ago, but I figure it's far enough along now to start posting.

This isn't entirely a ficathon story, but I realized that one of the last remaining ficathon prompts would fit beautifully as a plot development in this story, so rather than writing it as its own story, I decided to combine them into one.

Title: The Light of a Fading Sun
Rating: A fairly strong T/PG13
Spoilers/Warnings: This is an AU version of events diverging around the Siege. It contains heavy plot spoilers through Season 3's "Sunday". This is also somewhat darker/heavier than what I normally write, though not without its friendship moments.
Summary: Perhaps the only thing worse than blowing up 5/6 of a solar system is not blowing it up at all. Following the Siege, the characters drift apart ... but in their AU universe, the events on Doranda will have far-reaching and unexpected consequences. And theirs may not be the only universe affected.

As usual with my WIPs, it'll be posted in chapters on ff.net and then posted on my website when complete. Here's the link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3407293/1/

If you would like to know what the ficathon prompt is that I'm using, you can click under the cut to see it. It's a plot spoiler, though. The prompt that I'm using is: "A hostage situation on Atlantis involving John and Rodney."

[identity profile] pavaneofstars.livejournal.com 2007-02-22 08:06 am (UTC)(link)
Sounds intriguing. Off to read the fic. :)
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-02-23 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
Cool!

[identity profile] recycledfunk.livejournal.com 2007-02-22 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm really excited about this story. I tend to skip Trinity stories, I even kind of avoid the episode itself. I guess because while I love the tension and angst, Trinity leaves me so unsettled and so uncomfortable... *sigh* It's really hard to describe. It's kind of like D'argo's scream in the last Farscape episode: I love that moment but it's excruciating to watch.

I'm already so sad after this first chapter! Deliciously sad. But you're so talented that I know you're going to weave this into a fantastic and moving tale. Just like "That Which is Broken." I can't wait to see what happens next!
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-02-23 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

In all honesty, I avoid most post-Trinity stories as well -- although in my case, it's mainly because I don't like how either Rodney or John are characterized in them. And I hope that this one doesn't read as too much of a "victim Rodney" story because I'm really trying hard NOT to do that; if anything, he's the victim of himself.
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[identity profile] winter-elf.livejournal.com 2007-02-22 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
angst, angst, angst. Ouch. You weren't kidding. It's hard to see them at so total odds and unfriendly with each other!!!
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-02-23 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, and there's more angst where that came from. *winces* Hopefully this one won't be too depressing to read! I can only promise that there IS friendship stuff down the road.
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[identity profile] berlinghoff79.livejournal.com 2007-02-24 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I can only promise that there IS friendship stuff down the road.

You really promise? I just ask, because right now it's so painful to read. The angst!! And the tension between military and science team in general and John and Rodney in particular.*meeep*
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-02-24 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
No really, I swear! I do have more in mind for them than another year and a half of grinding angst, really! *grin*
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[identity profile] berlinghoff79.livejournal.com 2007-02-24 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Hm, is that a happy grin or an evil grin?
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
You'll just have to read the story and find out...

*grins again*

[identity profile] recycledfunk.livejournal.com 2007-02-25 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
Great twist in chapter 4! I love this story *big cheesy grin*
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] les342.livejournal.com 2007-02-25 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, I really didn't see THAT coming! I just got done reading the first five chapters that you have posted at ff.net. I almost gave up on it after the first couple of chapters, I must admit. It was hard to read, with them at odds with each other like that, but now it all makes sense. I'm really glad I kept reading.

Once again, I am in awe of your writing. And I know you have a life and all and I hope I'm not being too much of a nag, but PLEASE write more as quickly as you can. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thanks! Yeah ... I know that I probably lost a lot of readers in the first couple of chapters, before it gets to the REAL twist ... but I'm glad you stuck with it! (And, I'm writing, I'm writing as fast as I can!)

[identity profile] les342.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 03:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Sorry. I promise to try and be a patient little fic reader. And that would be with the emphasis on the word try. ;-)

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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 05:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that wasn't meant as a dig at you! I've certainly given up on fics that didn't seem to be my cup of tea. I'm just thinking that a lot of people probably quit reading in the first couple of chapters, and I really can't blame them.

[identity profile] les342.livejournal.com 2007-03-03 02:54 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I know you didn't. I was referring to you saying that you are writing as fast as you can and me not being a nag. But on second thought, never mind. I should know better than to try and make a post when I'm sick and drugged. I've done it before and it usually doesn't work out so well. LOL

[identity profile] tringasolitaria.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
Just wanted to let you know I love this story. I'm ashamed that it took me so long to send feedback, but it's awesome, and I can't wait to see where you're going with it.
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 04:46 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you're enjoying it! (And thanks for letting me know ... but it's not obligatory, y'know.)

[identity profile] tringasolitaria.livejournal.com 2007-03-06 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
Oh no, I didn't think it was, but it seemed a shame not to let you know when I was enjoying it so very much. (grin)

[identity profile] bramble-rose.livejournal.com 2007-02-28 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, go away for a weekend and see what happens!!! I'm mesmerised by where you've taken Atlantis and especially (of course :-) Rodney & John's relationship with this AU. Now with 'our' Rodney there for both us and Sheppard to hold them up together and compare what was and should be is breathtaking. I'm anxiously waiting for the next part to see how our John is doing.

And since I'm now switching between computers, heads up that I'm friending you to keep up with this story and others you write.

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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
*hee* Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! (And, about the friending, no problem ... I have an open-friending policy -- that is, I don't mind if anybody friends me, but I'm also very lazy about adding people back.)

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
OMFG!!! I have just spent (a lot) more than my lunch hour reading this and you, my friend, are: a) a very cheeky bugger and b) an evil mastermind of fic-writing.

Coz, not only a brilliantly written fic (and I just expect no less from you, simple as that) but also - OMG! - that conversation a few of us had a while back about weird characterisations for Sheppard and McKay in season 2 and making their interactions way more broken following Doranda and making John far more of a bastard to Rodney than he has ever been on the show - you went and made it into a completely believable AU. And then you went and dropped the "real" John and Rodney into the mix to show how completely not like them the whole thing was.

DUDE! I bow befoe the awesomeness that is you!

And any fic that makes me channel both Carson Beckett and Dean Winchester in the same post has gotta be awesome. Right?

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 02:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, when I said "weird characterisations" - you do know that I meant the conversation about the fics that turn Rodney into an emo victim (although your AU Rodney is still a fighter - go him!) and John into an abusive wanker (although your AU John is still much closer to the real thing - and the way you've made him more distant and untrusting is beleivable)?

Anyway, carry on, Awesome One!
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 07:48 am (UTC)(link)
*heeeeee*

Of course I know what you're talking about. The story kinda started out as a catharsis sort of thing after reading one too many uber-angsty Trinity tags: "So! Rodney and Sheppard aren't friends in Season 2, eh? I'll show you a season 2 where they're not friends!" But of course I had to come up with a rational chain of events that would have ended with that, and one thing led to another, and I couldn't KEEP writing them as not-friends; it would have killed me. I really didn't think in the beginning that it could possibly develop into a readable story, but then, unexpectedly, it did.

I'm especially glad that the AU characterizations are working for you -- because I'm trying to make the whole thing as much Rodney's fault as John's; not just because I have no interest in writing emo-Rodney, but because Rodney's *not* a victim and Sheppard's *not* a bully in any universe. It's fun (in a twisted kind of way) to make things spiral out of control, one step at a time off a very tall cliff, with our Sheppard and McKay for balance.

And your review made me giggly and happy, because I feel like I'm really achieving what I wanted with the story. Thanks!

any fic that makes me channel both Carson Beckett and Dean Winchester in the same post has gotta be awesome.

*laughs*

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2007-03-02 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
The story kinda started out as a catharsis sort of thing after reading one too many uber-angsty Trinity tags: "So! Rodney and Sheppard aren't friends in Season 2, eh? I'll show you a season 2 where they're not friends!"

LOL! I can *so* see that in the story. Not that the story doesn't work on its own without that added dimension, but as I read I started thinking "Ah, *THIS* is what she means by 'AU'. They really aren't the guys we know." And then when the guys we *do* know turned up - well, I was just in awe.

And the "Rod" thing? Doubley awesome!

Oh, and the channeling Dean thing? I actually called one of my brothers "dude" the other day. It's *NOT* a way that we usually address each other and he stared at me for half a second - and then launched into a 2 or 3 minute monologue in which every third word he said to me was "dude". So, okay, we're not exactly the Winchesters, but some sibling things are well nigh universal, are they not? ;-)

[identity profile] nicestkidintown.livejournal.com 2007-03-08 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
This fic is fantastic, please update soon! I can't wait to read what will happen next!