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Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2019-02-06 11:06 pm

Writing minifics

One thing I've been doing quite a lot of, over the last few years, is writing vignettes for prompts, usually on Tumblr (which is well suited to it) but occasionally here on DW as well. It's interesting because these usually aren't complete stories (if they do end up feeling like a complete story, I'll generally post them on AO3), and yet, there is technique to making them feel complete even when they are clearly just a small scene from something longer. Because it's not just a random scene that starts in some random place and stops equally randomly. There is a beginning, a middle, and an end; there's a little bit of scene-setting at the beginning, there's some sort of point to it (even if it's just a joke), and then it ends on a note that feels like, if not an actual ending, then ... punctuation, I guess. It doesn't just stop; there's a little bit of a "pop" at the end there.

Not that I always succeed at this. But this Agent Carter one I posted last night is a good example, I think, of a minific that I'm really happy with; it's clearly a scene from something longer -- it's not complete enough to post on AO3 as a story -- but it's enjoyable to read on its own and doesn't feel unfinished. At least I don't think so.

It's fun. I think this is part of why I keep doing it -- well, that and I love the prompt inspiration and really enjoy writing things for people. But it is an art form of its own, a little bit apart from the skill and technique of writing a fully developed story.

(I need to do a roundup post for last year's ficlets. I kinda meant to do that and then January got away from me and now it's February, help.)
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[personal profile] lazaefair 2019-02-07 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Honestly, I’ve been coming around to the attitude that anything goes on AO3, not just completed stories. There isn’t actually a requirement that stories be completed, it’s not actually a literary magazine, and it really ought to be treated like the Archive that’s in the name. Ficlet collections or series ought to be just as acceptable, especially with concerns about preserving fandom works on servers that aren’t at risk of the whims of for-profit entities.
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[personal profile] lazaefair 2019-02-08 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
I’m coming at it more from the standpoint of - well, the digital black hole has been on my mind again after all the Tumblr purge shenanigans. And all of those headcanons and not!fics and scraps and snippets do represent real creative work, are still fanworks, and to lose them is to lose pieces of culture. It’s losing information. It’s losing whatever future joy, sorrow, enjoyment, or tinder spark for further creativity in future readers.

I’m getting anxious thinking about all the content not archived or backed-up anywhere on Tumblr and Pillowfort. A lot of people don’t practice good personal data management either, so the files on their hard drives get deleted or moved around, so when a Tumblr bot flags a fanwork and deletes it, and the creator doesn’t have access to the file anymore? Bam, gone forever. A mod on Pillowfort has a bad day and goes on a deleting spree without notifying the creators? Bam, gone. It’s fandom in 2003 all over again.

Dreamwidth is more stable and trustworthy than those two sites for sure. But it’s still not set up for archiving the same way AO3 is, for maximum ease of searching and accessing - with the option to orphan works, and comprehensive sitewide tagging, and all of that good stuff. Which is why I think even the headcanons and metas and collaborative chat log storytelling sessions should go on AO3, tagged and labeled for what they are, and most importantly, preserved and available.
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[personal profile] yalumesse 2019-02-08 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
I'm afraid of the digital black hole a lot. All these snippets only on tumblr? I save the HTML file just in case. Stuff on AO3 doesn't feel quite so risky.

That said, I also feel awkward posting bits and pieces of unfinishd (often never to be finished) stories, but using the "Unfinished Work" tag helps a bit, makes sure people know what they're getting into from the start.
Edited 2019-02-08 04:35 (UTC)
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[personal profile] lazaefair 2019-02-08 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, exactly, as long as you've clearly tagged and labeled it, pretty much anything could (and should) go on AO3. Like some of the other commenters, I do enjoy reading even the ephemeral thoughts of my favorite writers, and I'd love to be able to find them more easily than on an unstructured mess like Tumblr.
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[personal profile] lazaefair 2019-02-08 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't want future digital archaeologists to have to reconstruct our entire fandom culture solely through complaints about whoever's our equivalent of Ea-Nasir, is all I'm saying. (Cassandra Clare? The author of My Immortal?)

Kidding, but I'm aware my anxieties about fanwork archiving come from my overall hoarding tendencies, compounded with growing up the child of a librarian, and only worsened by working professionally as a journalist/media producer where you have to archive and label everything your entire organization does because you almost certainly will be referring back to or using it in future stories.

I think we as humans weren't really meant to save every conversation we've ever had, no matter how delightful in the moment.

That's entirely fair. And I totally get the hesitation about posting scraps/ficlets/incompletes as standalone stories, I've actually been in the exact same boat since I got on AO3. It's only in the last month or so that I've started rethinking my assumptions about the nature and function of AO3.
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[personal profile] booksarelife 2019-02-08 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
(only replying to a tiny part of this) I think people, from my experience have much less strong issues about fandom-specific ficlet collections than about multifandom ficlet collections. I also personally like seeing the unfinished stuff or the things someone will never really write, but that's also just me
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[personal profile] sheron 2019-02-07 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I agree with it being an artform. An artform I'm not terribly good at XD I managed to do two of these for HSB which ended up around 700 words each, and I'm really happy with how they came out even though they were scenes only because I think there is an actual 'idea' there, and a resolution. It took me probably longer to do them than it does to create long-form fics because being succinct is hard. XD
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[personal profile] sheron 2019-02-08 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, sure, it does take practice. But it took me like a month of beating my head against the wall to write one of them. Do I like it a lot? YES. I love how it came out! Would I want to spend another month "improving" in that area? Hmmm........ XD
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[personal profile] leesa_perrie 2019-02-07 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
It is a definite artform, and you're excellent at it!
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[personal profile] arduinna 2019-02-07 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
This is what I call a "shack" in my head, after the old Canadian Shack challenge, which was basically, "a pairing of your choice is in a shack in Canada for reasons that don't need explaining at this juncture, for roughly 500 words. GO!"

It really is possible to tell a mini-story in that, and it's hard to get the rhythm of setting the scene without bogging down in backstory. They're delightful when they work, though!
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[personal profile] xparrot 2019-02-07 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahhh, it's so satisfying when those mini-fics work out! I think of a drabble as the most reduced form of them, but longer ones have a similar effect to them. I think of them almost like jokes, even if the stores are dramatic; they've got a setup and a "punchline", whether the point is to make you laugh or think or feel.

(I also think they're totally appropriate for AO3 and tend to put them in collections by fandom with limited tagging so they don't annoy people, but are still there to satisfy my completionist archiving. And also when I'm stalking an author I really like, I totally want to read their little ficlets about the characters I love! So I figure some might want to read mine, too. If you don't want to spend too much time making new works you could just use a really general fandom tag -- like, MCU might cover most of them for you? And then put the chars/pairing/whatever as the character title.)
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[personal profile] xparrot 2019-02-08 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I totally get that! Actually I see it from both sides. Because as an author, yeah, there's something weird about making a little half-headcanon ficlet into its own work. It feels much more suited to being one thing on a page you scroll through, rather than something you open in a separate tab or whatever -- it's just not supposed to have that much effort associated with it?

Yet on the other hand, as a reader, if I click on a <500 word story on AO3, headcanon with some dialog is pretty much exactly what I'm expecting? And also I'm biased now because a writer I really enjoy in my current fandom writes a whole bunch of ficlets like this on tumblr and only posts to AO3 if she turns them into full stories, but tracking down the ficlets on tumblr is hard and I wanna read them all, they're all adorable! So I'm in a 'post all the things please!' mindset.

(If you did want to post random ficlets to AO3 (not saying you have to!) you could always just make a single work with the fandom "Miscellaneous" or the like.)
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[personal profile] booksarelife 2019-02-08 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
(Also, I'm the anon that loved the Peggy/Daniel/Jack bit you just posted, it was sooo great)