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Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2008-07-06 06:42 pm

Because I just can't help myself

Going along doing edits to our Big Bang story, every once in a while I come across a scene that makes me giggle helplessly, in a "what were we on when we wrote this story?!" kind of way. Like this:


"So..." Rodney was caught between righteous indignation at having his privacy invaded, and respect, because he'd had a lifetime to learn his way around the Atlantis mainframe and still Zelenka had found him out. "Did you, uh. Read them?"

"I tried." Zelenka pushed up his glasses, and smiled ruefully. "I cannot understand half of the math."

"It's whale math," Rodney said loftily. "Of course you can't."

Zelenka stared at him for a moment. "You know, in the labs, Rodney, you are widely considered brilliant, but quite mad."

"All the greatest mathematicians and scientific theoreticians were considered mad in their time. Nostradamus, Newton, Rasputin, Tesla ..."

"Rodney, most of them were mad."

"Which does not in any way disprove my point," Rodney snapped.



It makes more sense in context. I think.

[identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
whale math?

it really is 60,000 words of crack isn't it :-P

made me chuckle.

[identity profile] greyias.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
Whale math! *snorfle* Rodney's comparing himself to Nostradamus and Rasputin! That alone is worth the price of admission.

[identity profile] mcalex22.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
Haha, whale math... trust Rodney to come up with something new...!

This is the slightly slash story or unintentional pre-slash one? I'm trying to guess the slash pairing. [livejournal.com profile] derry667 suggested to me that it's a Ronon/Rodney one and I'm thinking it would definitely have Rodney in it as one half but it's kinda fun guessing who he'll be pre-slashed with...! :D

(comment edited due to numerous grammatical errors!)
Edited 2008-07-07 03:49 (UTC)

[identity profile] mcalex22.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd like to be surprised because that will be fun! Oh dear, not that you've said it's not much of a surprise, I'm thinking John-Rodney because it always seems like an obvious choice and you do friend ship them a lot. But I'd also like Rodney-Ronon because that would crack me up and I can look at it and smile!

I'll wait patiently :)

[identity profile] water-soter.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! That's too funny, and I too have a strange sense of humor.

[identity profile] water-soter.livejournal.com 2008-07-09 04:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh!!

[identity profile] flingslass.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
Looking forward ot it :D
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[personal profile] naye 2008-07-07 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
Whale math! ♥

I love that bit. Although, yes, it's the kind of loving I do while giggling helplessly.
ext_2160: SGA John & Rodney (Rodney-working)

[identity profile] winter-elf.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 09:03 am (UTC)(link)
*giggles!* heh. Yea, Rodney, all mad..... :) Can't WAIT to read!!!!!

[identity profile] ladyoflisquill.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
"You know, in the labs, Rodney, you are widely considered brilliant, but quite mad."

LOL! Oh Radek. ::hugs him::

[identity profile] ladyoflisquill.livejournal.com 2008-07-09 09:11 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhh... interesting. You aim to tease, right?
ext_975: photo of a woof (Radek)

[identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 10:47 am (UTC)(link)
interestingly, this strikes me as lines that might actually be said on the show.... ::grin::
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[personal profile] leesa_perrie 2008-07-07 12:03 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Oh, sounds interesting, only I don't normally read slash (or het). How slashy is it? Like just kissing/hugging or more? I might make an exception for this one, unless it's really slashy.
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[personal profile] leesa_perrie 2008-07-07 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, I'll give it a go then!

[identity profile] indusnm.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
There's SGA big bang? Cool- where?

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2008-07-08 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
RASPUTIN?!?!?

Yeah, what were you guys on??? Seriously.

And generally gen reader or no, I don't think there's a chance in hell that I won't read this.

Have you got a title for it yet?

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2008-07-10 07:28 am (UTC)(link)
It's primarily gen. Which, I realize, is exactly what we complain about when other people say that about THEIR slash. Hey, I never claimed to be consistent! :D

LOL! I think what tends to annoy me about those fics is that the slash seems to be gratuitously "tacked on" (as one person once admitted to doing just to get more readers).

If, in the case of this story, the slash really did "write itself in", well then it would probably flow as a natural part of the story and wouldn't jar when I read it.

I don't object to slash. It just seems that 99% of the time slashfics seemed to aimed at "fulfilling needs" that I just don't have. So to me, reading it is, at best, pointless or, at worst, annoying.


It makes more sense when you realize that the whole thing is basically a big fairy tale.

O-kay. Given the authors involved (and their strange obsession with whales) theis sounds more and more interesting...
Edited 2008-07-10 07:28 (UTC)

[identity profile] scarym1.livejournal.com 2008-07-18 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
Love the scene. Looking forward to it. : )