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Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2006-04-25 07:41 am

A thought on Grace Under Pressure...

... and Sheppard's reactions therein.

Naturally, being me, one of my foci when watching (and re-watching) the episode is Sheppard's concern for Rodney, which I do think is there despite the lack of overt, outward signs. However, there's one subtle characterization point that took me quite awhile to pick up on ... until last night, in fact. It's simply this -- Sheppard is entirely serious throughout the whole episode. The only point where he gets a little of his normal flippancy back was when they took the puddlejumper underwater and he was trying to get Radek to be excited along with him -- and really, who can blame him; this is Sheppard after all ... if he didn't get at least a little bit excited about doing something new and different with the puddlejumper, you'd have to check him for pod marks. But then he snaps right back to "mister serious" again. Throughout the episode, he doesn't joke, he doesn't make light of the situation as he normally does (he even congratulations Radek for narrowing down the search area, and Sheppard doesn't really *ever* praise people, that I can think of) and at the end, when they find Rodney, there's no teasing *at all*. Even when he's trying to get Rodney to open the door, with the clock ticking and entire weight of the ocean about to come crashing down on their heads, he does it gently ... well, gently by Sheppardian standards, and especially compared to the tactics he normally takes when trying to motivate Rodney (as in Inferno or 38 Minutes).

And maybe I'm wrong and the writers didn't do it on purpose, but it's just so ... consistent, and so different from how he normally acts. He even passes up a couple of perfectly obvious places to tease McKay at the end (like about the Carter thing). And if it is intentional, then that's really impressive, because it's so understated and yet you look back at the episode and it's just there, all the way through, revealing how he feels more clearly than words ever could.

[identity profile] parisntripfan.livejournal.com 2006-04-26 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
I think it was an intentional choice by the writers. Part of it could also have been that Sheppard was missing his usual sparring partner - at least in tense situtions. So I think he was a bit at loose ends, not sure of what to do. Other then focus on the problem and work to solve it as quickly as he could.

But I think there were other signs of how worried he was...the fact that he half bullied Radek into going down with him in the jumper to try and get Rodney and Griffin back.

However, I prefer this method of showing us how much the Atlantis people care for Rodney. Particular for guys like Sheppard who aren't going to say it, but will SHOW it in the ways you mentioned above. The writers know this...they have often SHOWED us how characters react to things - trusting the actors show us it without words (facial expressions, vocal tone and body language) and that the viewers will get it without being told directly. It is one of things I really like about both shows is that they do that.

[identity profile] parisntripfan.livejournal.com 2006-04-26 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
We're simply not going to get huge oodles of angst from Sheppard because he doesn't think that way (something which I think a lot of fanfic writers don't quite get -- not that I mind some angst in fic, but canon Sheppard is NOT a guy who worries about worst-case scenarios).

Very true. Rodney is the worst-case scenario guy.

Part of it I think is the different medias. In prose you almost have to be a little more blantent, because there is not a person there to show the emotion behind the words. TV is a visual medium - prose is not.

And I did like the "Hey buddy..." when he was trying to get Rodney to open up the hatch. Sheppard had no idea if Rodney was alive or dead (although I think that was one of the few times he allowed those thoughts to enter his mind) or what state he was in.

I am not sure I it wasn't that he didn't know how far he could push Rodney - I think it was more that he knew that this was not the time to push him...that pushing him wouldn't get the desired results. He would have to have known - even without knowing exactly what Rodney had gone through for the last few hours - that Rodney was not in the strongest of mental states, so the usual teasing would not be the best way to get to him.

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2006-04-26 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I agree too.

Sheppard's concern was always obvious to me and shown in a way that was in character for him. But I hadn't really picked up on the lack of flippancy. And now that you mention it, that scene when they find the jumper and he talks to Rodney, I can almost hear him holding back. The bit where he explains "OK, long story short,..." etc - well, there's almost a measured quality to his voice, as if he's judging just how much he can prod. And that, as you say, is very different from how he usually prods Rodney into doing something. Usually, he just "jumps in, feet first" because normally Rodney can take it.

And yeah, I do think this comparative tentativeness seems like the result of the tension that Sheppard has been under. And it's hard to know if it was intentionally written that way - but yeah, if was - WOW for the subtlety!

Good call!

[identity profile] sgatazmy.livejournal.com 2006-04-29 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
wow, that is interesting insight. I just found your blog btw.

-Tazmy