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Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2006-11-05 01:02 pm

Writin'

So I've been banging my head against [livejournal.com profile] les342's Carson/Rodney ficathon story for weeks now. Wrote the beginning but could not get it to work, could not get it to work ... so yesterday, I finally scrapped that idea (it's a good start and I can use it for something else, but it just wasn't working for this story) and started fresh. It went swimmingly. I decided to use an idea that I've been wanting to write for a while -- a sequel to my earlier story "Running on Empty", in which Sheppard makes good on his promise (or threat) to teach Rodney wilderness survival. And they've brought Carson and Teyla along for the ride ...

I've always found Carson a very difficult character to write, both because his "voice" is hard for me, and because I know zilch about medical stuff. I usually muddle through by being as vague as possible, but with Carson around, especially when I'm doing a Carson POV, that just doesn't work. So far, though, it's running very smoothly. I wrote about 7500 words yesterday. I have enough other things to do today that I doubt if I'll get much done on it, but I'm hoping to bang out a few more pages this evening. Working title: "Wilderness Survival 101"

"Ghost in the Machine" is not abandoned, but is temporarily shelved while I work on this one. I'm hoping that writing this story will help get me past my block on "Ghost".

[identity profile] with-apostrophe.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 06:53 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I know the feeling. I have a whole slew of stuff that I spent forever trying to convince myself was NOT a Mary-Sue. Well it IS a Mary-Sue, blatantly - and whilst I have no problem with that in my own head, I do have some sense of pride so I'm never inflicting it upon anyone. However, there's good stuff in there so I'll recycle.... Also the flashfic (and I use that term very loosely) I'm working on started life as something completely different, in story, narration style, characterisation style....
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I recycle stuff all the time. I've actually got some scenes swimming around that don't have fics for them yet -- either having been cut out of existing stories, or just snippets of dialogue or events that occurred to me randomly, not as part of any particular story.

[identity profile] les342.livejournal.com 2006-11-07 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
So, you get me all excited with that teaser and then you go an change it on me. Nice! Thanks a lot!

Just kidding. *g* I don't really care what the story ends up being about as long as Carson's in it. There's just not enough Carson fic out there for my liking. Of course, all the SGA fic ever written could be about Carson and it still wouldn't be enough as far as I'm concerned.

What me obsessed. Noooooo, not at all. I prefer to call it dedicated. LOL
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[identity profile] friendshipper.livejournal.com 2006-11-07 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
So, you get me all excited with that teaser and then you go an change it on me. Nice! Thanks a lot!

LOL! Well, this is why I probably shouldn't post teasers when the stories are in the extreme early stages. Because I do change stuff a *lot*. And for all I know, I may stall out on this story and go back to working on that one ... I do that, too!

Erika (who writes as "emergencyfan") describes her writing style as "gazelle on crack". I think that's fairly accurate here, as well. ;)

[identity profile] les342.livejournal.com 2006-11-08 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
That's okay. I don't mind waiting. I'm sure it will be worth the wait. As long as there is Carson, Carson whumping, angst, Carson whumping, Carson and Rodney interaction, and oh yes, Carson whumping too, then I'll be a happy fangirl.

Btw, did I happen to mention that I'd like to see some Carson whumping in this fic? I just wanted to make sure you caught that part. ;-) LOL

[identity profile] derry667.livejournal.com 2006-11-08 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Well... I know I've been somewhat inconspicuous lately but if you want someone to give a "medical once over" to any Carson POV, you can always email me...

In general, I agree with the "keep it vague as possible" even when the POV is a medical professional. I suppose it's just a case of vagueness within certain boundaries LOL!

But anyway, drop me a line if you'd like me to help. ;-)