sholio: tree-shaped cookie (Christmas cookies)
Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2023-11-26 11:48 pm

Or, as a life choice ...

... what if I changed my entire cover 12 hours before the preorder locks for release?

But I was struggling with some aspects of the previous cover and I loved the suggestions in the comments and ...



The keys may be a bit much (there are a plot-relevant set of keys in the book, though!) but I feel like it's hitting the genre tropes a bit better now...?

Edit: New version! (Just some minor tweaks.)




Added a bloody knife tucked into the bushes and toned down the snow a bit.
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[personal profile] passingbuzzards 2023-11-27 08:59 am (UTC)(link)

The keys are a nice touch imo! (Having started reading this one today...)

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[personal profile] yhlee 2023-11-27 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
ADORBS.
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[personal profile] goss 2023-11-27 10:06 am (UTC)(link)
Nice! I like that you zoomed in to the house's doorstep. Feels like it draws you into the story with all the little details.
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[personal profile] goss 2023-11-27 10:14 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Glad to know they were helpful. :) :)
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[personal profile] sallymn 2023-11-27 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh that's a lovely cover!
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[personal profile] rheanna 2023-11-27 12:07 pm (UTC)(link)

I really like that cover!

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[personal profile] vass 2023-11-27 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh hell yeah. The candy cane murder is perfect, it says "Christmas cozy" so clearly. The knife is good too. I liked the old art, but this one's branding is much clearer and still looks very good.
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[personal profile] philomytha 2023-11-27 12:38 pm (UTC)(link)
That is a really fantastic cover, those were great suggestions! Also I have started reading it and am having a blast and the keys are indeed looking like an excellent Easter egg :-D
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[personal profile] leesa_perrie 2023-11-27 01:45 pm (UTC)(link)
That does look better! I think I'd be hopeless at covers if I ever wrote professionally, lol!
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[personal profile] ellenmillion 2023-11-27 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
YES to the keys!! I like this a lot! Much less generic.
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[personal profile] sheron 2023-11-27 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this a lot! I like the keys
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[personal profile] ranalore 2023-11-27 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
The other cover didn't really grab me, but this one is a delight. I haven't even started reading the book, and I can tell there are details here that will turn out to be easter eggs when I run across them in the text. That's a great invitation that any regular reader of cozies will recognize.
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[personal profile] michelel72 2023-11-27 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a great cover; the candy-cane treatment tickles me. (And the positions of the knife and cat make me think the cat is judging someone for leaving something so tacky on the front stoop, heh.)
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[personal profile] genarti 2023-11-28 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
I love this! Super cute, and the genre signals are nice and clear.
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[personal profile] via_ostiense 2023-11-28 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
I got the book and am excited to read it! Currently starting on Moose-Taken Identity.
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[personal profile] yalumesse 2023-11-28 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
I like this one much better! I think the knife could be more subtle, though. It looks like it might hurt the cat :(
Edited 2023-11-28 03:49 (UTC)
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[personal profile] yalumesse 2023-11-28 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Could it go in front of the 'plant pot' in the front-left, above the "J" in "Julie"?