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Sholio ([personal profile] sholio) wrote2021-05-15 09:02 pm

Watership Down Part I: The Journey

And here we go with the Watership Down reread! Feel free to link to it if you like. Posts will be roughly once a week, give or take a bit depending on my free time, one post per section and then, after that, perhaps some additional posts for the extra stories and adaptations.

Spoiler policy: I will be avoiding spoilers for future chapters in the main body of the post, but spoilers are fine in the comments. Therefore, if you're reading for the first time, the posts will be fine to read, but the comments are read-at-your-own-risk. (Let me know if you feel this should change.)

Also please feel free to talk among yourselves in the comments if someone else raises a point or asks a question you want to comment on. If you have your own discussion questions, things that were unclear, or anything else you want to ask about, please bring it up!


So first of all, I'm really enjoying the reread! It's been so long since I read the book that, while I remember some scenes with incredible vividness (the river crossing, Fiver's vision of a field of blood, the snare), as well as the overall ambiance, I'm rediscovering a lot of the specific details as I read.

One thing I remember from every time I've read this book is how intensely I visualize everything. I love all the lush descriptions of sunsets and meadows and exactly what plants would be growing or blooming at any given time of year -- including the darker parts, a hedgehog run over on the road or a crow trying to peck a rabbit's eyes out.

I'm fascinated to notice, this time around, how the book takes place on a rabbit timescale, in both time and space. In addition to the rich and detailed nature descriptions, I think this micro-focus on events happening at rabbit-speed is another part of what makes the book feel so immersive, drawing you into the rabbits' world. The time scale feels stretched, compared to how humans experience time. Two days feels like a really long time; a mile feels like forever. But these are small creatures who live a whole lifetime in just a couple of years. At the start of the book, Hazel and Fiver are only about six months old. No wonder a whole multi-part epic journey can take place from moonset to sunrise.

I didn't remember Hazel being as big and assertive as he is, especially early on. Fiver thinks he'll get into the Owsla someday, which suggests that Hazel is not a small rabbit! I also had forgotten that Bigwig is as smart as he is. I had remembered it more of a Hazel = brains, Bigwig = brawn kind of dynamic, but in fact Hazel can fight pretty well, and Bigwig is actually the only one besides Blackberry and Fiver who understands what's happening with the floating raft, as well as having a much greater working knowledge of the outside world, from roads to snares, than the others do. He also looks out for the smaller rabbits, not to the extent Hazel does, but definitely to an extent, noticing that they need to stop because they're tired and protecting Pipkin from the crow.

Also, the snare scene is still wonderful. As well as just being generally excellent on its own (and highly relevant to my h/c-loving interests; it's no surprise this is one of the scenes I've remembered most vividly all my life), I love that it brings them together and helps forge them into a cohesive group, after being scattered and fighting and constantly struggling over leadership in the chapters leading up to this one. There's a very cohesive structure to this section; it doesn't resolve the question of where they end up yet, but it's built around their bonding as a group in a very pleasing way.

Cowslip's warren - you know, reading the book analytically as well as for pleasure, I'm actually not really sure how we're meant to take that section. Is it simply an obstacle for Hazel's group to overcome? Are they meant to represent corruption and collaboration, with their more humanlike aspects as objectively horrific as Hazel's group find them? Or are they what happens when rabbits don't have to spend all their time trying to survive and find themselves with free time to develop concepts like Art? Hazel's group views them with suspicion, fear, and horror, but are we meant to? Discuss!

Incidentally, I had completely missed that Nildro-hain died on every previous reread, and would have missed it this time if it wasn't briefly mentioned later on. (I don't think that's a spoiler; I think we're meant to infer it here. It was just a little too subtle for me.)

Questions:
1. Do you have a particularly favorite bit of nature description or other favorite bit from this section? Favorite scene or chapter?

2. Who are your favorite rabbit(s), if you have any? (Or is it someone who hasn't showed up in the book yet?)

3. Thoughts on Cowslip's warren, thematically or otherwise?

4. Do you agree about the snare scene as a bonding element to close out the section? Come talk to me about the snare scene! Presumed dead! Teamwork! Rabbit first aid!

5. How do you feel about Fiver's powers, and the other slight elements of magical realism, in an otherwise basically realistic book? I mean, besides the talking rabbits. Do the fantasy touches work for you?

And anything else you want to talk about!
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[personal profile] rachelmanija 2021-05-16 05:38 am (UTC)(link)
The Silverweed section is one of my favorites and most haunting parts of the book. There's a lot in there which can only be appreciated upon re-reading, as you don't understand the import the first time, and some bits of foreshadowing I only noticed this time, even though I've read the book so many times before.

I do think we're meant to see it as horrifying. Normally one sees art as a positive thing, Silverweed's poetry is good art, and in the book as a whole art (mostly storytelling) and adopting new ideas are all positive. I think this makes Cowslip's warren and their situation complex and interesting. The rabbits are being creative, which normally is good, but it's a compensation for an ongoing horror that they're choosing not to do anything about.

We see that later the Watership Down rabbits do take some ideas from their warren (their building techniques and IIRC a few other things) so it's not that everything about the warren is bad, but that the central badness of it makes all the good aspects irrelevant.

Cowslip's odd manner when he first meets them makes more sense - and is utterly horrifying - when you know that he's luring them to their deaths.

When they crouch in their scrapes before going to Cowslip's warren, there's this bit of description: Across the field the bloom of the cherry tree under which they had sat that morning hung sodden and spoiled. Just like the inviting warren, which is rotten at heart.

I only realized the significance of this bit this time around:

[Blackberry says,] "What do they stand to get from asking us to join their warren?"

"Fools attract elil by being easy prey," said Bigwig.
He goes on to speculate that the other rabbits don't want them hanging around attracting predators.

Holy shit! Bigwig answered Blackberry's question exactly, though none of them realize it: they are the fools who will become easy prey to elil - in this case, the farmer and his snares - and that's what the rabbits of Cowslip's warren stand to gain by inviting them.

The day after they arrive, Bigwig and Hazel find a scene which, in retrospect, we realize is where a rabbit was snared and taken away by the farmer. I think this isn't just some rabbit, it's Nildro-Hain, Strawberry's mate; she was seen the night before and then never again, and Hazel notices Strawberry isn't around when they return to the warren.

Unlike most poetry in books by non-poets, I really like Silverweed's poem as poetry. It's subtle enough that when I read this book as a kid, I didn't understand how it related to what Fiver said about it. Going away with the wind, the stream, the leaves, and the sun is a metaphor for dying; Silverweed makes it sound beautiful and peaceful, a longed-for transformation to another state.

Silverweed's poem is the only time any of Cowslip's rabbits ask "Where?" His poem repeatedly asks, "Where are you going?" In the context of the warren, "Where?" means death; "Where is So-and-So?" can't be asked, because the answer might be "Snared, dead." So when he says, "Where are you going, wind?" the answer has to be to death.

Silverweed seems a psychic, like Fiver, but one who turned inward rather than, like Fiver, taking action. Hazel tells one of Cowslip's rabbits that Fiver is "a bit of a poet too," so this is a connection they clearly all understand. Bigwig even understands that Fiver's rant about things being true and still being folly is about Silverweed, when Hazel can't make heads or tails of it. What Silverweed is saying is true, in the sense that death is a journey and a transformation; it's folly to embrace a death you could avoid.

Right after this, Fiver says, "Where is the--"

Hazel interrupted him and as he did so Fiver started.


I never noticed this before, but Hazel is doing what Cowslip's rabbits do: they interrupt rabbits who say "Where--" No wonder Fiver starts!

"You are closer to death than I" is such a haunting line.

Another think that struck me just this time is that the rabbits of the warren of the shining wire aren't just choosing to live with the risk of the snares, they're actively accepting the death they bring to the point where they refuse to help anyone who gets caught by one. We see that they don't kill immediately, and it's possible to rescue a rabbit who gets caught. But when Fiver runs to ask for help, they all ignore and finally try to silence him.

I don't think it's just because it's an outsider who got caught. I think they have a law of not helping each other, either. If the rabbits keep breaking out of snares, then it stops being worth it for the farmer to feed them and protect them from elil. They'd become an ordinary warren with ordinary dangers and no special perks. Better to write poetry to the shining wire.
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[personal profile] selenak 2021-05-16 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
We see that later the Watership Down rabbits do take some ideas from their warren (their building techniques and IIRC a few other things) so it's not that everything about the warren is bad, but that the central badness of it makes all the good aspects irrelevant.

Same with Efrafa, just in the other direction; and again, the Waterhip Down rabbits later incorporate some of the good aspects. That's another difference to either warren, too: the willingness to adopt new habits and ideas if they provide benefits, least of all when said ideas hail from opponents. Both Cowslip's warren and Efrafa are not willing to do that (see what happens when Blackavar and the female rabbits first suggest alterations), but Hazel and "our" rabbits are. (Though not their old chief rabbit; his failure to listen and to be flexiple for input dooms the Sandleford Warren.) I'm reminded of Neil Gaiman once quipping you can sum up Morpheus' arc in "Sandman" as "The King of Dreams learns you have to change or die; he makes his choice". There's something similar going on in Watership Down. (Though "change" of course does not mean changing everything about yourself.)

Something that struck me upon first reading and still does when rereading is that I can't not associate every day fascism with Cowslip's warren. Obviously with Efrafa, the parallels are fare stronger drawn because of the authoritarian command structure which Cowslip's warren does not have. But the willingness to sacrifice a part of your friends/neighbours for your convenience and safefy, the element of betrayal that lies in that, and the whole dressing it up with euphemisms or not talking about it - that's represented in Cowslip's warren.

Silverweed seems a psychic, like Fiver, but one who turned inward rather than, like Fiver, taking action.

I think that's why Fiver is especially horrified by Silverweed's poetry - he sees Silverweed as how he might have turned out himself, if he'd been born into this warren.

Also: it strikes me that Hyzenthlay is the other rabbit we hear create and declare poetry. In both cases, the poetry grows out of an unbearable situation. But Hyzenthlay and the other does are willing to do something about it, miserable as their situaton is, while Silverwood (as far as we know) is not.

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[personal profile] krait 2021-05-17 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
Bigwig answered Blackberry's question exactly, though none of them realize it: they are the fools who will become easy prey to elil - in this case, the farmer and his snares - and that's what the rabbits of Cowslip's warren stand to gain

There's even more answers going on!
* When they first spot Cowslip, Hazel says, "I don't see how it can be a trap, and anyway we can always run." It's absolutely a trap that none of them can see, on both the metaphorical and the most literal level! But they do end up solving it by running.
* Hazel's first words to Cowslip are "We've come over the heather," but Cowslip says nothing until after Hazel speaks again.
* When Fiver asks Cowslip outright if he can be trusted, Cowslip replies, "[I]f you want the answers to your questions, then I'd say yes, you can trust us: we don't want to drive you away. And there is a warren here, but not as big a one as we should like. Why should we want to hurt you? There's plenty of grass, surely?" All of this except the trust is entirely correct: they want the newcomers to stay, the warren being bigger would benefit them, attacking the newcomers would be pointless, and food is abundant enough they'd never need to worry about grass.

And, of course, they do sing like birds! :D
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[personal profile] oracne 2021-05-22 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
In the section with Kehaar, which I'm on now, one of the rabbits says that Nildro-hain stopped running. Which I don't think I ever noticed before, and I don't think Strawberry said it when he first joined up with Hazel's group. But it makes sense that she was the one who got snared. She got fridged! Possibly literally....
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[personal profile] rachelmanija 2021-05-16 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Bigwig is my favorite but I love Hazel more and more on every re-read. Often the main character in this sort of story is kind of a blank slate, but Hazel is really interesting. I love how protective he is of Fiver and how he defers to Fiver on matters where he thinks Fiver knows best.

One of Hazel's best qualities is that he knows the strengths of the other rabbits and will listen to their advice and trust their expertise. It's a genuine leadership trait but not one depicted often because in western culture it's seen as weakness: leaders are supposed to be individualists who do everything themselves. I wonder if the more collective nature of rabbits made Adams able to create a leader whose greatest strength is letting others' strengths shine.

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If I had to be like one of the rabbits, I would want to be like Hazel. He's empathetic, too, which helps him to value the opinions of the others.
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[personal profile] rachelmanija 2021-05-16 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
Good point about the passage of time from rabbit POV; I hadn't registered that.

My favorite example of rabbit POV is that the genius-level conceptual breakthrough is that if wood floats, you can sit on it and also float. What really makes that work is that it's so far removed from how most rabbits think that only a few of them even understand what happened.

I also love that anything more than four is "a thousand." Basically, "one, two, three, four, lots."

The nature descriptions are so marvelous. The bean field is my favorite from this section. The scented field that's also a refuge (well, before the crow shows up). Lovely.

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I’m not reading along (at the moment at least) but I do love how the book gradually teaches rabbit language, so that when, at the climax, Bigwig (I think) tells another character “Silflay hraka u embleer hrair”, it needs NO translation. :-D
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YES! I thought that was genius the first time I read it, and I still do.
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On my reread, because I read it so much as a kid, I discovered I remember lapine.
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[personal profile] lunabee34 2021-05-16 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I don't have time to reread right now, but I am loving this conversation. So many wonderful insights here.

Hazel is my favorite from start to finish. But I love them all.

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[personal profile] krait 2021-05-17 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
Some of my thoughts are up above, but to continue - concepts of leadership in this book are so varied, and really run the gamut! We've got the very traditional monarch, the Threarah, who ultimately fails his people by complacence (thinking no threat can be greater than threats encountered in the past); we've got Hazel, the inexperienced new leader who's still proving himself; we've got the extreme individualists of Cowslip's warren who live at the mercy of their enemy; we've got the overbearing tyrant of Efafra who creates such a miserable state that it breeds his own downfall; and we've got the mythical ideal in El-ahrairah.

On the smaller scale, some of the things I noticed and wanted to comment about:
* It's really interesting to me how Fiver has a deep suspicion and fear of the warren, but actually puts himself in more danger through his reaction to it - he keeps slipping out aboveground (where the snares are), stays out of the flayrah field (the only place snares are pretty much guaranteed not to be), and goes bolting madly out of the tunnels after Silverweed's poetry (not looking where he's going). So there are definitely limitations/drawbacks to his Seeing.
* Cowslip actively encouraging Hazel to lose his caution: "It's quite safe, Hazel," said Cowslip behind him in the hole. "I know you're used to taking a good look round when you silflay, but here we generally go straight out." D:
* Bigwig refers to Hazel as "one of the best rabbits we've got" quite emphatically, and then Hazel proves it true a minute later by saving his life. ♥

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Yes, that's very true about Fiver. His instincts are right, but left to his own devices he doesn't really know how to act on them. Without Hazel, he'd probably have left Sandleford alone and gotten eaten by some elil long before reaching Watership Down--though if he'd made it to Cowslip's warren, he certainly wouldn't have stopped there.

Cowslip is so awful.

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I'm still finishing my re-read of the first section, but already have enough comments I thought I would mirror from my own journal. Though I haven't read this book in decades, I read it several times in middle school. I've been getting that thing where the words are familiar as I read them, like they made grooves in my mind. I got a strong sense of nostalgia from just the epigraph to the first chapter (Cassandra, in Aeschylus’ “Agamemnon”) and the first sentence. Just the transition from Cassandra: The stench is like a breath from the tomb. to The primroses were over. felt magic, even now. The words in Lapine (rabbit language) are also so very familiar, and I can feel them on my tongue.

As an adult, I’m marveling at how skillfully Adams used omniscient pov. And I had the passing thought that even though he began the book as stories for his daughters, almost all of the characters are male.

I love all the nature description, despite knowing practically nothing about all the different plants and flower’s being described; I might go and look some of them up after this re-read.

I recall being a little scared of Fiver and his prophecies as a kid. Now, as an adult and a writer, I really admire the way his visions shape the plot.
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[personal profile] viridian5 2021-05-22 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
This is my first reread in decades, and I missed Nildro-hain's death too on this run.

Another reason Strawberry left with them. I'm not sure if the reader is meant to be as horrified by Cowslip's warren having developed art, poetry, song, and dance as the Sandleford hlessil are. Given that the other rabbit communities shown in the book also seem to be an example of what not to do, I think Cowslip's warren is more than just an obstacle. Plus, the snare experience bonds "our" rabbits into a more cohesive group whose members value and respect each other more as a result. It amuses me that Bigwig might have died if the sheer rage of hearing about how Cowslip and his warren reacted to being asked to help him hadn't revived him.

I enjoyed the rabbits' mythological stories and have no problem with Fiver (and some other rabbits) having the Sight. Animals can do some things that seem very uncanny to humans so why not? At their level of technology, human stuff is often magic to them.

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[personal profile] sheron 2021-06-01 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
"Fools attract elil by being easy prey," said Bigwig. He goes on to speculate that the other rabbits don't want them hanging around attracting predators.
Holy shit! Bigwig answered Blackberry's question exactly, though none of them realize it: they are the fools who will become easy prey to elil - in this case, the farmer and his snares - and that's what the rabbits of Cowslip's warren stand to gain by inviting them.
The day after they arrive, Bigwig and Hazel find a scene which, in retrospect, we realize is where a rabbit was snared and taken away by the farmer. I think this isn't just some rabbit, it's Nildro-Hain, Strawberry's mate; she was seen the night before and then never again, and Hazel notices Strawberry isn't around when they return to the warren.


Wow I did not pick up on this (on the first read) which I think is intended. It's really neat though, that this is in the book we just don't realize it.

My favourite is Hazel for sure, although I'm also very fond of his relationship with Bigwig and Fiver. I love a character that ends up in a position of authority and has to manage group dynamics successfully.
Also, I mean, it's been noted that if you give me a clever, impulsive, leader-type with the self-preservation of a gnat and -- takes a look at fandoms -- I'm there for it :P
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[personal profile] sheron 2021-06-01 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I forgot to mention this bit:

How do you feel about Fiver's powers, and the other slight elements of magical realism, in an otherwise basically realistic book? I mean, besides the talking rabbits. Do the fantasy touches work for you?

I love them, Fiver's probably my second favourite after Hazel (close tie with Bigwig) and I really really love Cassandra style characters when they're actually believed by their friends in their predictions.

.......Oh god I just had another fic idea.