Oh! ♥ I read this, and smiled and laughed and went "aww". Repeatedly. You do a terrific job with Harry's voice, and everyone else - it's funny and sweet and spot-on with the interaction, and, just, love. ♥
Liked your sleep-net spell-thing - interesting concept, and magic that felt perfectly like Harry's magic! Not to mention the whole lust spell... aww, Harry. How can something be so hysterical and tragic at the same time? Lovely twist on the plot, making it that simple, or complicated, or however you want to put it.
Extra love with whipped cream on top for the Harry-Thomas interaction! SO true to the characters, so very close and important to each other, but still keeping that final bit of distance, because it's what they do. Awwww. I'm still smiling about that; and Michael (poor Michael!) and - Murphy. Of course. Murphy coming to check up on Harry and Harry actually talking to Murphy - awww. The intimacy of the final scene is so very much them. ♥
Also, Bob lusting after Harry? GLEE~. So wrong, so funny!
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Liked your sleep-net spell-thing - interesting concept, and magic that felt perfectly like Harry's magic! Not to mention the whole lust spell... aww, Harry. How can something be so hysterical and tragic at the same time? Lovely twist on the plot, making it that simple, or complicated, or however you want to put it.
Extra love with whipped cream on top for the Harry-Thomas interaction! SO true to the characters, so very close and important to each other, but still keeping that final bit of distance, because it's what they do. Awwww. I'm still smiling about that; and Michael (poor Michael!) and - Murphy. Of course. Murphy coming to check up on Harry and Harry actually talking to Murphy - awww. The intimacy of the final scene is so very much them. ♥
Also, Bob lusting after Harry? GLEE~. So wrong, so funny!