ext_6222 ([identity profile] ceitie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sholio 2010-09-12 03:21 am (UTC)

I love the sense of family that this story has, found both in celebration and, well, in Rodney getting kind of bit by a rattlesnake. :D And I really like this line, where John acknowledges the changes in himself :

This was the first time he'd looked up at the sky in a while, though. Things had just been too busy. I've been looking at the world, John thought, not out into nothingness.

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