I love this verse and this addition rocks. I love the spin through the seasons as we get a glimpse into the lives of the extended family. Wonderful character moments throughout, especially between Teyla and John. I love that she can see through John and knows him so well. The kite sequence was beautifully written. Very touching how the flying touched John, so much so that he added the message to the kite. Aww, the group Christmas hug and stargazing was a nice, touching, happy family moment. Nice to see all the gang here and how they have happily adapted to living together yet keeping their distinct personalities. Great addition to the verse. So happy to see a new chapter. Thank you!