ext_24344 ([identity profile] kristen999.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sholio 2010-03-15 04:43 pm (UTC)

This was so lovely and sweet..and I love the flow of this. Very easy going. I have a tough time sometimes with the organic feel of strolling around with fun banter and those soft strokes of introspection that you've blended so perfectly here.

Other people already picked out my favorite lines, but this one sums it up very nicely.

Four years since the super-Wraith planet -- four and a half years, then, since his decision to come to the Pegasus Galaxy had hung on the flip of a coin. And the people around him, with him, were the living evidence of the rightness of his decision, the best decision he almost didn't make.



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