Thanks for writing this, I'm a huge wiseguy fan. I especially liked how you portrayed Susan so deftly.
. Right now, Dan just wants Vinnie out, out of this fucked-up situation with these fucked-up people. Instead, he watches Susan's hands caress Vinnie's face, his shoulders. It should be heartwarming but it's not, because Dan's reminded of a child cradling a toy or a pet more than a woman reaching for her lover. Human beings are nothing but possessions to people like the Profitts, Dan knows, and for all the sweetness that Vinnie might see in Susan, it doesn't change the facts of who and what she is.
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