I really liked this. I liked the way that when Rodney was lost, they came and found him. I really like the relationships between John, Rodney, and Teyla and the way you've translated them to the "printed page."
Well, honestly, if you wrote John, Rodney, and Teyla sorting the laundry, I'd probably read it.
And //"You would never ask. That is why we came."//... STOP COMING UP WITH LINES I WISH I'D WRITTEN, DAMMIT. ^_^
I think he should name the puppy "Rudy," mostly because I just reread a book with a boy protagonist named Rudy. Also, it goes well with "Rodney."
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Well, honestly, if you wrote John, Rodney, and Teyla sorting the laundry, I'd probably read it.
And //"You would never ask. That is why we came."//...
STOP COMING UP WITH LINES I WISH I'D WRITTEN, DAMMIT. ^_^
I think he should name the puppy "Rudy," mostly because I just reread a book with a boy protagonist named Rudy. Also, it goes well with "Rodney."
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