Thank you! :D Glad you liked it! This was a massively hard one to write, because the prompt was something along the lines of Ronon trying to kill Sheppard -- seriously, no-holds-barred trying to kill him, and it was hard to figure out how to write that while still keeping everybody in character!

I also never thought that "economy of phrasing" would be a word anyone would apply to my writing style :D -- if anything, I think I have a bit of a tendency to run on and on -- but in this case I *did* try to write it pretty tight.