Thanks for the comments! :) Yeah ... it's -10 degrees and snowy for us, so the desert sounds almost appealing ...
I'm curious now: this was pretty creepy. What was your "over the edge" idea that you back away from? Character death?
I was thinking torture or rape. Using the basic idea of the team members genuinely wanting to hurt each other, there are a lot of very dark places it could have gone, especially if they'd all four been affected. As it is, it was over pretty quick and no one was left with severe psychological damage. I'm really more about the team as a unit; dividing them is something that's difficult for me to write.
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I'm curious now: this was pretty creepy. What was your "over the edge" idea that you back away from? Character death?
I was thinking torture or rape. Using the basic idea of the team members genuinely wanting to hurt each other, there are a lot of very dark places it could have gone, especially if they'd all four been affected. As it is, it was over pretty quick and no one was left with severe psychological damage. I'm really more about the team as a unit; dividing them is something that's difficult for me to write.