auburn: Owl silhouette against full moon (Owl Moon)
auburn ([personal profile] auburn) wrote in [personal profile] sholio 2015-05-13 08:23 pm (UTC)

I did! It was everything I like in a good action-adventure story but with more character insight. Sam's a marvelous view point character. Not that I don't like him, but I loved that this wasn't about Steve or Steve's relationship with Bucky. The bonding between Sam and Bucky worked perfectly and you never wrote Bucky as a basket case or Sam as intrusively know-it-all. You managed a lot of action without lots of gore and ugliness, which is a hard row to hoe, too. And the story is just the right length, it feels complete and solid, but doesn't drag out beyond the plot's support.

Thank you for writing it, it was a breath of fresh air.

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